Well, Victor has went off to Ingolstadt and I am all alone with the family. I hope that he writes back soon.
Victor hasn't wrote to me nor father in six years. I have tried to write to him but he will never write back. I wonder what is making him not want to write atleast one word to his family?
Well, I have decided to write a letter to Victor. Henry tries to tell me that he's alright but it does not soothe me I need to know from him that he is okay. The letter is pretty much a main idea of whats been going on for the past SIX YEARS!!!! I really miss that guy! I wonder if he will ever write back...
He wrote back... but it was only two sentences. Does he not care that people care about him? Sometimes he makes me so mad. But I love him to death and I don't think I would be able to survive if I lost him but not seeing him for six years kind of feels like losing him if I really think about it.
I really liked this post. I knew from the beginning who the character was. It showed what had been going on in her life when he left. The only thing I would recommend is adding just a bit more of emotion to this post. Maybe tell a little of how her heart is aching for Victor to return, or of how she feels isolated with no one there for her to turn to. These are just a couple of thoughts that came to me.
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